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Neruda’s Elixir

A Poem About Personal Power

Carol Anne Shaw
2 min readJan 5, 2024
Photo by Cristobal Baeza on Unsplash

She leans against the rock,

Feet blistered

Face burnt

An ache in her back that wasn’t there yesterday

She is only halfway up

And though she is alone

She is only slightly worried about where she will spend the night

She’s been here before

Been more tired and more hungry

Had the same wet hair from the relentless rain

This time, though, she is three days away from her last coffee

She sits

Rubs her feet

Sees the first fingers of light come through the clouds

Watches it kiss coral wings of flamingos in flight — fifty at least, flying high

Over her head

To crest the summit

Her back warms, and her hair dries

She wipes her face

Finds her boots

And shortly after, finds her pace

Hours later, there she is, on the other side of the mountain

Sitting with Marcela Silva, who is closer to eighty than seventy

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Carol Anne Shaw
Carol Anne Shaw

Written by Carol Anne Shaw

Writer & audiobook narrator. Author of three award-winning books for mg readers (Ronsdale Press) & four indie-pubbed novels for young adults. Vancouver Isle, BC

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