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Adelaide

When lightning strikes twice

Carol Anne Shaw
2 min readMay 25, 2024
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Adelaide has been struck by lightning twice

But it doesn’t stop her from walking in the rain

The more rain, the better

And not the drizzling kind

The kind of rain that means business

The kind of rain that shuts people inside and draws curtains

The kind of rain that causes cars to pull to the side of the road

Addie can tell when its coming by the static in her hair

By the ozone in the air

By the restless way, cats bury down in chairs

Addie has a yellow raincoat

Black, shiny boots and a grass-green umbrella with sporting silver stars

She will wait for the storm

The Boom-Clap-Flash kind

The kind that will see her jumping puddles and dodging forks

The kind that will have her talked about in the grocery store for days to come

“That Adelaide,” the butcher will say. “There’s something not right there.”

“It’s the lightning,” Olga from the post office will answer. “It messed her up some.”

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Carol Anne Shaw
Carol Anne Shaw

Written by Carol Anne Shaw

Writer & audiobook narrator. Author of three award-winning books for mg readers (Ronsdale Press) & four indie-pubbed novels for young adults. Vancouver Isle, BC

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